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Monday, July 29, 2013

The Book of Helen by Sherry Antonetti




The Book of Helen is a historical fiction about a historical fiction. At 65, Helen of Troy is newly widowed and exiled to the island of Rhodes where she's been offered sanctuary by the ruler, her childhood friend, Queen Polyoxo.  Having no rule, no family, no husband, no power and no role, Helen is striving to once again give the world a reason to remember her and to know something of her story as opposed to the poet's take. Helen's story addresses the three questions never answered in Greek Myths. 1) Why did she leave with Paris --impulsive yes but this is a powerful smart beautiful woman, there had to be more for her than eye candy to leave a life of luxury and power 2) why didn't the Trojans just toss her over the wall when she showed up with so much baggage that wasn't Spartan gold --i.e. the 1000 ships of ticked off Greeks and 3) what made Menelaus take her back when she'd put him through public humiliation and a 10 year war of waste? The line in Homer's poem is, "She bared her breast, he dropped his sword."  But there had to be more than that.  Her newly acquired scribe Pythia acts as the keeper of Helen's treasures and memories and helps her reestablish herself in her new home, but there are some not so willing  to forget the wounds of Helen's past that made her the most famous in addition to being the most beautiful, woman in the world.  

Get it from MuseItUp Publishing.


Excerpt:
“Vain, ignorant, power hungry fools you’ve begotten Menelaus!” she muttered, and looked out again at the smoke from her husband’s pyre. “Goddesses give me all the strengths you have, I’ll need them!” and she set about changing from a mourning widow to a ruling queen. 

She fingered several dresses before settling on the deep gray robe trimmed with the thinnest line of gold. It conveyed a sense of power. Perfect. She let down her hair, weaving in a golden rope to help obscure the grey. A tall alabaster bottle, shaped like a swan, a gift from her mother, held her favorite perfume. Opening it filled the room with the heady scent of lemon and heart of jasmine, along with notes of rose, vanilla and amber. It provided her with the comfort, the presence of an ally, even though an unseen one. Jeweled gold combs placed in her hair set the sides softly. Arching her back and lifting her neck to appear even taller, she left the chamber.
           
The full council was already in session. “How long ago did they start?” she wondered.
Xenodamos held the floor. He spoke forcefully about the need to show strength against the Dorians, reasserting Spartan roots. “We need to show the same teeth which made us the most feared of all peoples. To do this, we must act not as kings or queens. We must act as free Spartans!” The men nodded in agreement.

“The great kings of old eschewed riches, sweets and soft things.” His eyes lingered on Helen in her finery. “They saw modesty and self discipline as the price of their freedom. They refused the honey cakes and sweet wines of those they defeated so as not to take on the slavish habits of the conquered who could not endure long without their luxuries.” He paused as his half brother stood up, dramatically opening a large scroll. The queen grudgingly conceded it was a beautifully planned performance and a more sophisticated elegant argument than anything Xenodamos or Megapenthes might devise. Someone else orchestrated this show.
           
Xenodamos continued, “The Dorians have threatened to take over much of the Greek mainland. They care only for the advancement of their own power.”
Megapenthes spread out his map detailing the sea coast islands. “They have taken much of the land, burned villages, destroyed armies.” He pointed to places on the map with his knife. We cannot let Sparta or its people become part of the Dorian conquest. We must stop them here.” He pointed to Athens.
          
“If I may speak in the midst of this fine presentation,” Helen walked to the center of the room. She still commanded everyone’s attention. But she caught the whisper of one of her sons, “This ought to be good.”
          
“It’s true. The king is dead and we have a pending crisis on our hands. We all know the Dorians outnumber us five to one. As my son pointed out, we have seen their ruthlessness in the destruction of whole towns.

“We are strong. But even we need time to assemble an army to take on such a force. We are not ready. Send an envoy with some of our ‘softer things’ Xenodamos so rightly condemns, to lull them into thinking we will surrender without a struggle.” She surveyed the map gesturing to the same points Megapenthes marked with nicks from his knife.
          
“The Dorians have already spread themselves across much of the Northern provinces. They may appreciate the opportunity not to have to battle again so soon. It will allow us to gather our forces, assemble allies and devise a strategy for plucking them from our shores.”
          
Megapenthes shook his head. Xenodamos glowered. Helen could see the men considering her proposal. “I didn’t even have a plan until now.” she thought smugly. Some in the audience were swayed. Her plan seemed not only reasonable but crafty. Nicostratus, the one stepson she loved well, even trusted, stood. He would help her win the day.


About Writing The Book Helen: The Book of Helen started when I was stuck in the hospital with my eighth child. My daughter was two weeks old and had RSV, a congestive virus which can be fatal to newborns if left untreated.  In between fretting and nursing and fretting at the nurses, I was reading the Odyssey. I'd left for the hospital in a hurry and my husband thoughtfully tucked the translation he'd just bought into my bag of stuff.  There were two lines about Helen slipping opium into the wine of the warriors as they talked about Odysseus and the Trojan war with Odysseus's son, Telemcachus. I thought, that little minx! She's drugging them so they won't get worked up about who started it all and I started writing Helen stories, about her betrothal, about her treasures, and so the story started to hinge on the tokens and gifts she'd acquired over her life. 

Then I started thinking about Helen and her version of what happened and why.  I started reading other Helen myths and discovered that she is the original Fan fiction character in Western literature, because every age crafted her to their own image either of what feminine beauty should be, or of the dangers of a beautiful woman. She became a resident of Hell in Dante's inferno, she's been a lover, a pawn of the gods, a rape victim, a shallow woman who liked boy toy eye candy, and a strong woman who could argue her case even to the people who suffered most for her decisions. While the Odyssey and the Iliad remained the same, Helen was often plucked from her story and plunged into new ones. It was fun and for a first time writer, wonderful, because whenever I got stuck in the writing process, it was time to go back to reading, there were always new myths, new stories to discover. I envisioned my Helen as an Ancient world's CEO, capable, detail oriented, a manager of people and things, controlling and showy, in addition to being spoiled, beautiful, demanding and at the same time, thoughtful about how things should be as well as how they are. Six years, three laptops and two more children later, she's ready.      

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Sherry G. Antonetti has a master’s in Special Education from Boston College in addition to being a stay at home mom to her ten children.

Wednesday, February 13, 2013

Great Weight Write-Off Winner--Sherry Antonetti

This weeks' winner is Sherry Antonetti!  Sherry lost 3.7 pounds this week, after a valiant but unfortunate battle with brownies last week.



Sherry has a book coming out in May, The Book of Helen
"Everyone talks about the Trojan war like they know it, but no one ever bothered to ask me." --Helen of Troy.   
I'm pretty certain I heard her pitch it at the MuseOnline conference.  Sounds like a fun book, especially if you like Greek history and mythology.

Ironically, Sherry's blog is called Chocolate For Your Brain!  A sometimes silly, sometimes reflective blog that works as both a means for me to find out what I'm thinking and preserve in internet amber, some of the more memorable moments of raising these ten children.  Also a soapbox for when the political itch in me needs to be scratched.  Calorie free sweetness all for free, all for you, truth covered with humor because no one wants to eat a bar of pure nougat. 

 Drop by her blog and congratulate her this week--and let her know if you are interested in the book.  I'm sure she'd be glad to e-mail you when it comes out!

BTW, overall, the group lost 5.2 pounds, 1.9 percent body fat, and 3.4 inches.  Several of us have had medical issues, though, from injury and surgery to colds. We're all feeling pretty good about our progress and working together.  If you are having problems keeping on your new health routine, consider joining forces with some friends.

Tuesday, January 15, 2013

The Great Weight Write-Off

Well, now that I've whined about not having fairy godfathers, I've decided I need to be my own.  After all, I'm a smart woman, and while I don't have $10,000 to toss around per episode, I can afford to spend a little on me, credit card be da*&ed.  

Step one: the body.

After gaining several pounds over Christmas--thanks ever so much to folks who sent us designer foods--I decided the only way to cut sweets is to keep them out of the house, so the new rule is dessert once a week and no sodas except when having junk food or pizza--and those are severely cut down.  We were junk food junkies, probably eating five-10 meals a week in the form of burgers, pizza, donuts, etc.  Since Rob left, we've cut that down to perhaps three, with occasional slips.  Daily sodas are gone, too.

Since I knew I am not alone in wanting to lose, I sent a call to my writing friends and twelve of us have started the Great Weight Write-Off.  We promise to blog our progress and support each other, and once a week, whoever made the most progress toward their goals gets their book, blog, etc toured by the rest.  We've set our goals for March 1, and if this helps, we'll keep going.

Tomorrow, I will tell you about my first day at Biofit boot camp, but today, let me introduce you to the Dieting Dozen:

I have a BIG favor to ask:  Please find one person here who speaks to you as far as lifestyle, writing, or fitness goal, visit their blog, and encourage them  in this process.  It will mean the world--or perhaps a few pounds! 



Sherry Antonetti, http://www.sherryantonettiwrites.blogspot.com:  "I’m 23 years married to the father of our 6 girls and 4 boys, have a master’s in special education and a writer in my second career.  Over the past five years, I’ve been published in the Washington Post, Faith &Family Live, Catholic Standard, Catholic Digest and Beaumont Enterprise, and am currently editing my first work of fiction, slated for publishing in May of 2013! Other than that, I stink at housework, love to eat (especially good chocolate), and exercise and I are not friends." Goal:  lose 20 pounds, develop better eating habits, and get out of those maternity pants!.


Grace Bridges www.splashdownbooks.com, splashdownbooks.com"Grace Bridges owns Splashdown Books, an indie press that publishes speculative fiction. She is also a science fiction author and has two published books: Faith Awakened (2007) and Legendary Space Pilgrims (2010). Grace is a New Zealander of Irish descent and a multilingual do-it-yourself force to be reckoned with."  GOAL: 10-15 lb by March 1; overall 40-45lb, eat more slowly, and to not look fat

Karina, http://fabianspace.com: Karina Fabian writes about noir dragon detectives, zombie exterminators, and psychics driven insane by their powers.  She also writes devotionals and stories about Catholicism.  An eclectic woman with eclectic writing, she invites you to join her for fiction faith and fun in Fabianspace (http://fabianspace.com).  Roughly the shape of a pudding bag, she’s like to get back to an hourglass figure, although her goal is simply to be somewhat more svelte by the time her husband comes home from Iraq. GOAL:  14 pounds, and take one inch off waist and one inch off thighs

Margaret Fieland, http://www.margaretfieland.com/,  http://blog.margaretfieland.com/
and the much-neglected http://relocated.margaretfieland.com/:
Born and raised in New York City, Margaret Fieland has been around art and music all her life.  Her poems and stories have appeared in journals such as  Turbulence Magazine, Front Range Review, and All Rights Reserved. She is one of the Poetic Muselings. Their poetry anthology, "Lifelines," was published by Inkspotter Publishing in November, 2011.  She is the author of "Relocated," published by MuseItUp Publishing, and of "Sand in the Desert." Her book,  "The Angry Little Boy," will be published by 4RV publishing in early 2013. You may visit her website, http://www.margaretfieland.com. or http://poetic-muselings.net/  GOAL: Lose five pounds and exercise (walk) at least five days out of the week

Rebecca Frech, http://shovedtothem.blogspot.com:  “Rebecca is the writer of the award winning blog Shoved to Them, speaker, wife, and homeschooling mother of seven. “ Goal: 15-20 by March 1, 40 lbs overall , stop snacking from boredom or while writing, and  have people  start saying "Wow! You've had seven kids?"

Laura Lowder, www.lauralowder.wordpress.com: Goal: Lose 15 pounds by March 1 and to be able to do something physical for more than 5 minutes without being out of breath, hurting, having to sit down. 

Dennis P McGeehan, http://warriorsworlddad.com, http://workplacetrainingsolutions.info:  “ Married to Susann, we have 8 kids ages 15 to 27. I retired in 2011 and am pursuing a writing career and starting a Safety Counseling Business.”  Goal:  By March 31 - 255 or less and lose two notches on belt.

Kristyn Phipps, www.kristynphipps.com, www.kristynphipps.com/blog: “I was born and raised in the foothills of NC. I’m a novas writer, published in an anthology is 2012 and working on my first novel.  I just celebrated eight years of marriage with my hero, Patrick. We have two daughters, Ellie and Brie, who have begun following my health patterns. My long term goal is to get back to my pre-baby weight and shape so that by our tenth anniversary, I can wear the wedding dress I never got to wear. I want to teach my girls how to eat and stay healthy all of their lives.”  Goal:  Lose 20 pounds and 2 dress sizes

K. Ann Seeton,  hg2au.com: “Mother of four ages 24, 22, 3, and 11 months. Convert.  Married to Gary for 5 years. Lifelong geek and bookworm, love animals, church music, Christ, Catholicism, and my family. Some people knit, I study.  BA English and Art, certified to teach grades 1-8 with specialty areas, nearly all the credits for a BS in Breeding Theory, finally finished a graduate degree=MA in theological studies; some additional coursework in Carmelite Studies, and then there is the passion for history and a wide variety of other subjects. Introvert, love odd things like my autoharps, which I play very badly, Ballroom dance (I take classes for exercise) and long skirts which I am taking a class on drafting patterns so I can create my own perfect skirts. I play in the Society for Creative Anachronism. I home school for many reasons. I write because I cannot NOT write, any more than I could avoid studying or breathing. I am a daughter of the Church. I like teaching in RCIA but am not currently teaching.”  Goal: I am staying on my diet until I reach my target of 130 pounds. By March 1, I would like to say I have stayed on the diet perfectly and lost some weight.  Also, manage blood sugars.

Cindy Smith, https://www.facebook.com/cindyemmet.smith:  “I am almost 61, have three children—21, 26, 29 and I live with my husband. I retired from my job of 8 years last summer and am working on self-publishing my books. I currently have two in print. My website will be up soon. “ Goal: lose 5 pounds and exercise 5 days a week. I would like to increase my endurance from 1 mile on the treadmill to 2.5 and increase speed from 2 to 3

Barbara Wood, https://www.facebook.com/barbara.wood.58173: “I am about to turn 59 in a couple of weeks. At that age, my metabolism changed with my change of life. As a result, maintaining, let alone losing is a real struggle.”  Goal:  By the end of March, I am hoping to lose 7-8 lbs.