Exclusive Excerpt of Mind Over Psyche

This month is my Mind Over Psyche book tour.  It came out Sept 13 from DragonMoon.  For the next couple of weeks, I'm sharing some excerpts.

This is from near the beginning of the book.  As you may know from Mind Over Mind, Deryl has psychic abilities that drove him insane years ago, but working with Joshua helped him get them under control.  However, no one but Joshua and Dr. Malachai believe him--and Malachai has had no intention of ever releasing Deryl from the mental institution.  In Mind Over Mind, Deryl, while feverish, thought demons were after him (they were) and used telekinesis to fight them off.  This scene takes place a couple of weeks later, in Dr. Malachai's office:

When Deryl didn’t answer except to glare his challenge, Malachai shrugged.  “Thanks to your…demonstration…while delirious during your appendicitis, I believe it’s safe now to admit you do have some unexplainable talents, and that they may indeed be a factor in your emotional stability.  Quite a breakthrough, if you think about it.”  He leaned his elbows on his desk, hands clasped, and regarded Deryl with a not-quite smug smile.

Deryl seethed inside, but forced himself to mimic the psychiatrist’s posture.  He was getting out of this place, one way or another.  “So?”

Malachai raised a brow, and the fullness of the plan pressed into Deryl’s mind even before he felt the invitation.

Still, Deryl squinted, making a show of concentration.  No way would he let Malachai know the extent of his abilities.  He’d always had a hard time reading the chief psychiatrist—now was his chance to take advantage of Malachai’s openness.  Besides, he needed time to think.

Malachai’s name on respected psychiatric journals.  No more articles in rag-mags like Psychic Living Now!

“You want to study my abilities openly…” Deryl spoke slowly.

Malachai on the podium at international symposiums, presenting his findings to his peers, video of Deryl in an MRI chamber performing tricks while the results of his brain scan played on a separate screen.

Malachai nodded.  “In return, I will arrange for you to have outpatient status.”

Deryl being called to his side, like a faithful dog, and told to perform similar tricks for Malachai’s audience.

Malachai pointed to the EEG machine in the corner.  That surprised Deryl; usually, it remained discreetly behind the cabinet doors until he had Deryl’s cooperation.  “It’s the best we have at the moment, but enough for a start.  We’ll do a simple telekinesis exercise and get some preliminary readings.  Monday, I’ll use that data to arrange for more precise instruments.  This is your chance at a normal life…”

Malachai with his own private institute, combing the country for other psychics.  A team of scientists under Malachai’s direction, drawing blood, administering drugs—playing with Deryl’s body chemistry to determine the cause of his abilities.  Seeking a way to replicate them in others.  

A normal life?  Deryl shivered.  “And if I refuse?”

A barrier clamped down so hard on Malachai’s thoughts that Deryl flinched.  

“I think neither of us wants to investigate that possibility,” he replied, but Deryl felt the threat in his bland words.

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Blog Tour Kickoff: Mind Over Psyche

Today, I'm kicking off a new blog tour for Mind Over Psyche, the second in the Mind Over Trilogy.  Deryl Stephens isn't crazy; he's psychic.  At last, he'd found someone to believe him.  Joshua helped him gain control over his abilities, but he realizes that the only way to gain a life of his own is to escape the asylum where he's been captive five years.  Unfortunately, escape leads him top another planet, where the dangers to his sanity and to the his life and Joshua's are greater than those he faced on Earth.

I thought it might be fun to start the tour with an interview I did of Mind Over Mind, kind of a catch up, but also a nice explanation of the characters and world:

1. This novel has quite a history, doesn't it?

I started this in college as a short story for a science fiction class.  I wrote it more out of spite than anything; my midterm paper got a B because the professor didn't like my analysis of some story I've long since forgotten.  He loved the story and thought I should make it into a novel.

I spent the next year working on that novel, and even sent it out to several publishers, who all sent me very nice form rejections.  So I gave it up, finished college, became an officer in the military, got married and had kids, then started a writing career.

In 2001, I was homeschooling two kids and had a toddler and a baby at home, so I decided to brush off the old novel and try again.  I thought it'd be easy until I saw how, well, shallow it was.  The character was a cool college Mary Sue with psychic powers, and Joshua was a hick sidekick.  TRIPE!  Ten years of living had given me some perspective, and I realized I needed to rethink the whole thing.  I did love the premise, though, and Kanaan and Tasmae (known as the Miscria.)  So I rethought poor Deryl until he ended up with a tortured history and was living in an asylum.  Joshua became a protégée intern (and went from country hick to Black kid from the suburbs--don’t ask how; I don't question these things.)  The book then had enough meat to become a trilogy.  It took another ten years to find it a home, but I'm pleased as punch to have DragonMoon publishing it.

2. What are the major differences between your original draft and the current one .... the quality of writing aside, that is?

Characters are more complex, as is the plot.  There are some important issues the characters are dealing with, from mental illness to abortions to attempted suicide.  Frankly, it's just overall more fun to read, too.

3. What would you say your aspirations were for Mind Over Mind?

To get read--by a lot of people. Thousands.  Tens of thousands.  (Help me out here, folks and buy it?)
To have the trilogy out in the next few years.  DragonMoon has the second book, and I need to write the third next year.

4. How much work did you put into the story itself before you started writing? Was this outlined before the computer was even warm, or did you just start writing before you started?

I tend to be a seat-of-the-pants writer.  I know the beginning, the end, and some of the stops on the way, but the characters lead me through the story.  This one, of course, had the general idea written out with the college draft; but I am discovering so much great stuff as I write.  I often imagine scenes for days or even weeks before starting, but because I'm writing another project at the time rather than because I'm waiting for it to gel in my mind.  I sometimes write scenes or snippets in a file for safekeeping.

5. Neuro-Linguistic Programming is a psychological concept you use in the book as a way for Joshua to help Ydrel with his “issues.” How much research into it did you have to do for the book?

Most of it came from a very interesting book called, Frogs into Princes, which I'd had to read in college and fortunately kept all those years.  I also had an NLP therapist read the book to make sure I had accurately portrayed the use of NLP (at least within allowance for the fantasy setting.)

6.  Back when you were interviewed for ISIG2, you mentioned how you were more into fantasy than science fiction. Yet, you made this one a work of science fiction, even using fantasy novels as a template in some rather scientific uses. What made you decide to do this as SF, and not fantasy?

That's funny; I've always thought of this one as fantasy, since Deryl has psychic powers.  Sometimes the lines between fantasy and science fiction blur; this must be one of those times.

7. How much work went into designing the various alien cultures?

As much as has been needed for the story.  I know that sounds like a snarky answer, but it's the truth.  I spend a wonderful lunch hour with my astronomy professor in college playing with the orbits of the planets, but otherwise, the characters teach me their worlds as I write them.  Barin came as a particular surprise as I neared the end of Mind Over Psyche.  I had not imagined an underground world whose civilization collapses on a regular basis by an unknown natural disaster (which is really the Miscria of Kanaan using her telekinetic powers to push the planets apart from each other.)

8 What, if anything, surprised you while writing Mind over Mind?

How vicious I can be to my characters?  I've seriously messed with Deryl's mind, literally and figuratively.  But he's so much more interesting this way!

9. Do you have any advice to blog readers who are thinking about writing their own novel?

If you don't sit down and write it, it won't get written.  Start there.

10. Last chance: What do you think is the one thing we should all remember about Mind Over Mind?

That there will be a second book!  In Mind Over Psyche, Deryl escapes the asylum, inadvertently taking Joshua with him.  Deryl will meet Tasmae; Joshua will learn his has an ability of his own; Tasmae gets to go fabulously insane; and Deryl will at last confront The Master.